Submission for the Odyssey II
project, chapter seven. Things are getting pretty exciting now. I can't wait to see where it all goes.
So, I like Paul. I thought he should stick around until story's end at least. Right from the beginning I got a sense that he was a little on the milquetoast side, due to the fact that in chapter one he admonishes himself for not stepping up and being more of a help to the man on the train. He's been little more than an unwilling participant thus far, so I thought I'd set him up for a little redemption in the end. I'd really like to see Paul become something more than just an incubator, heh. Update
Check out ~TravTheMad
's killer art piece, chosen to accompany this chapter! [link]